First Love (4b)

FIRST LOVE

You slurped me
Then swallowed me whole
Like Jonah
And the whale
You the marine mammal
I the zooplankton

~~~~~~~~~~~

Shadorma November

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feeling.

Posted on November 4, 2017, in Shadorma and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. I love your choice of words in this one, Ben.

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  2. Quite the vivid image, and very effective!

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  3. A whale of a poem. May Jonah’s result in a like experience. Hopefully the universe doesn’t belch.

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