The Writer: Tirtinska
THE WRITER
Oodled in through the swing doors his literary mind
A few steps behind his limp fedora, cheap cigar.
The tearoom loungers dressed to the nines and la-di-da
Surveyed with frank disdain, took him in, defined, declined.
Scans them back. “Red angry pustules from a dose of clap.”
Thoughts laced with meander juice. “Know what I’m doing.”
(The story teller’s stock reflex on spotting a trap.)
“I can do this … No probs. I know the way out. Chewing.”
Orders coffee, two week old doughnuts, a cheesy wrap.
Ladies discretely confer deeming themselves refined.
“A dotty old grandpa. Hardly my cup of tea, dear.
What’s he doing? Pulling out a pen and notebook. Ah!
That’s it then. All’s forgiven. And not a bad behind.”
Posted on October 8, 2020, in Poetry, Tirtinska and tagged Attitude, Interaction. Bookmark the permalink. 7 Comments.
I love this! Actually read it a couple of days ago (it made me smile 🙂) but I didn’t have time to comment then. Sorry I’m slow getting back here. You set the scene up vividly, with your usual skill….not to mention your insight into human behavior. Thanks for that smile, Ben
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That’s a relief. I wondered if the STD reference had offended you. I’m finding this tritinska format quite fun. It takes me down some unexpected avenues. Wondering whether I should try to put together a whole volume of them. We shall see.
The actal germ of this piece is a set of words that came to me while getting off to sleep the other night which not actually obviously connected to one another when they arrived. Yes, the final line makes me smile too. 😊
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Ben, that’d be cool if you put together a book of tirtinska’s! Let me know if you decide to do that. Perhaps you’ll start a trend. 😀
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There would of course need to be fifty-five poems. Meantime check your in tray. 🙂
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Email received, thanks Ben! I love the images for both files…. will enjoy reading the shadorma’s again! 🙂
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Self-publishing via PDF is satisfyingly quick and easy. Been working on a third tirtinska but nowhere near done as yet.
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Will watch for it!
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