Unfinished Love Poem


Lay it aside for a while
Maybe days or weeks
Sometimes even years

Till all falls into place
A significant poem will
Always find its moment

And in that moment
Their writer will also
Find a completeness

Those not significant
Reveal themselves as such
And are easily thrown away

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feeling.

Posted on November 3, 2019, in Poetry and tagged , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 10 Comments.

  1. Oh I love this because it is possible to find so much connection and appreciation in the moment from the one that was meant to read your words. And so when you write, you craft them specially to make that connection, hoping beyond words that magic will happen.

    And then the moment comes, the connection made, and WOW! Amazing Feelings Abounding.

    Truly it is a treasure to be able to write, to write for someone special, to have someone special take notice of your writing, to have the dawning realization that someone special has come along – coming together to make so many moments happy.

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  2. Am really familiar with this process! You describe it so artfully, Ben….πŸ™‚

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  3. I have found this to be true over and over again… πŸ™‚ Great poem.. perfectly timed. πŸ™‚

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