Visceral: Tanka
VISCERAL
Sometimes I wonder
Which it is the one of us
Who’s the most afraid
Sometimes I sit and wonder
Whether you wonder that too
Posted on September 8, 2019, in Poetry, Tanka and tagged Fear, Relationships, Uncertainty. Bookmark the permalink. 5 Comments.
Ben Naga 
I had to think about this for quite a few moments before I could know what my deepest fear is. This is truthfully because I feel as though I have little to fear. But my deepest fear is waking from this wonderful dream reality has become.
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I may have presented this wrongly although I included the tags ‘Fear’, ‘Relationships’ and ‘Uncertainty’. I was attempting to recreate a scene where two people in a relationship are not too sure what is happening, either because it is quite new or else it is starting to fall apart.
I know that you are well founded in a solid relationship where fear has little place. I am glad of that for you both and of course your children.
My writing may represent at times a confessional, at others a consoling or helping hand. at others a guiding star.
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Beautiful
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Thank you. A few weeks back a woman approached me looking for companionship. On the day to day level it has been a disaster. Very productive creatively though so no complaints once the scars heal. I hear echoes from chez toi.
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Came across this poem tonight. Still a great piece. Hope you are well, my friend.
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