Sep 4
Posted by Ben Naga
FADED PHOTOS
Lost love Long past days Present echoes Whisper among the trees Old news ….. …..
Posted on September 4, 2019, in Cinqku, Poetry and tagged Life, Loss, Love, Memories. Bookmark the permalink. 6 Comments.
Excellent and you got the line count correct, which is where I went wrong on my first one 💜💜
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Thank you. It went the other way round. I listened to the music, head a little weep and that lead to the poem.
‘you got the line count correct’
And the syllable count!.(I double checked. 🙂 )
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Well done you I have to try again 😁
We shall await. 🙂
With baited breath 🤐
But of course. 🙂
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“You should stop words and letters, and learn to withdraw and reflect on yourself. When you do so, your body and mind will naturally fall away, and your original Buddha nature will appear.” – Dogen.
Excellent and you got the line count correct, which is where I went wrong on my first one 💜💜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. It went the other way round. I listened to the music, head a little weep and that lead to the poem.
‘you got the line count correct’
And the syllable count!.(I double checked. 🙂 )
LikeLike
Well done you I have to try again 😁
LikeLiked by 1 person
We shall await. 🙂
LikeLike
With baited breath 🤐
LikeLiked by 1 person
But of course. 🙂
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