Redeemed

REDEEMED

First comes forgiveness
After long denying it
Then this too dissolves

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feelings.

Posted on June 26, 2018, in Poetry, Senryu and tagged , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 7 Comments.

  1. Another gem, Ben.

    File the sharp edges,
    polish with our forgiveness,
    light comes shining through.

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  2. Forgiveness calls for digging deeply, so it isn’t found easily. But, when it surfaces, a load is lightened. 🙂 Good one, Ben!

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