Heresy (28a)
HERESY
Explosive
This marriage of words
Half-closed doors
Fly open
Naked, virgin thoughts scamper
Hither and thither
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Posted on November 28, 2017, in Shadorma and tagged Belief, Language, Meaning, Religion, Thoughts, Words. Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.
Ben Naga 
One of your best, Ben – in my opinion.
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Glad you enjoyed it. I have now spotted the two mistakes and effected repairs
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I didn’t notice any mistakes – which shows how good it is. (As a former proofreader with OCD that’s unusual.)
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It’s all about the fingers. Once I stop being excited by the ideas and start checking the syllables …
I’d like to flatter myself that this means that the ideas were so enthralling you passed over the tedious business of checking the number of syllables involved. 😛
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I’d guess that’s exactly what happened. 😊
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🙂
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BTW, (and completely unrelated) I’m still not always getting email notifications and you possibly missed a couple of my posts, like “Clouds” from November 4th. Please let me know if ever I miss one of yours. 🙂 )
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I think I remember reading “Clouds” and probably got disturbed or distracted before I finished digesting it prior to liking and commenting. Must have unwittingly closed its browser tab on my return not realising I hadn’t finished with it. Thanks for letting me know. You say a “couple” of posts I might have missed but I’ve checked back as far as late September I have Liked (and probably also Commented on) everything you have posted since then.
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I had a feeling something like that might’ve happened and appreciate your going back and reading Clouds. (That must’ve been the only one missed.) But then it’s not like you’re obligated to like and comment on any of my poems 😊 and I shouldn’t have even mentioned it. It was presumptuous of me. 😳
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Not too much flagellation now, Betty. 😛
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Just OCD, tying up loose ends and all that. 😉
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🙂
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