Not-so-smart Mouth (25b)


Using wit
With intent to hurt
A sour note
Spoils the chord
You play and to be honest
You test my patience


This was written as a contribution to The Secret Keeper’s Weekly Writing Prompt No. 55.

Seed Words: | WIT | HURT | NOTE | HONEST | TEST |


Shadorma November

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feeling.

Posted on November 25, 2017, in Shadorma and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.

  1. we can do without the sour notes

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  2. I agree about those sour notes. May we all become more concordant….

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  3. Excellent write Ben.. and many light jokes are often meant to wound.. and are not funny at all..
    Hope you are having a peaceful Sunday 🙂

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