Lost At Sea


Awaken from sleep
Recalling another world
Which one is the dream?

Each breath a butterfly’s wing
Lacy … bearing me aloft


About Ben Naga

Pilgrim on the lam. Please feel free to explore the links to learn more. I trust you will find some things there will have been worth the effort. See you there.

Posted on August 16, 2017, in Tanka and tagged , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 11 Comments.

  1. That other world – I too sometimes wonder which is the most real (dreams can be so vivid, and the people so real)… Last two lines are lovely – the space between both realities?

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  2. Is anyone sure they know which one is real? full / off

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  3. which one when one is awaking and those around one are sleeping

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