Great Truths

GREAT TRUTHS

Perhaps
The greatest Truths
Are those which

When you realise them
Your view of the world
Is totally transformed

And you ask yourself how
Given so obvious they are
You never saw them before

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About Ben Naga

Pilgrim on the lam. Please feel free to explore the links to learn more. I trust you will find some things there will have been worth the effort. See you there.

Posted on September 12, 2014, in Poetry, Writing and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.

  1. Hello! I like the content of your poem. I like the line “given so obvious they are.” I like how its out of order ordering makes the reader think more deeply about what you said. I was thinking how interesting it would be if the poem simply started with the line “Your view of the world.” Just a thought if you were to revise. Thanks for sharing!

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  2. Because we weren’t looking perhaps. You know I really like this piece.

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  3. Sometimes we see and hear only what we choose to..Great poem, Ben!

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  4. Sometimes you cannot see the wood for the trees, until you walk within them.. 🙂

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