Smile away worries
Think big and think Ascension
Up, up and away!

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feeling.

Posted on August 15, 2012, in Poetry, Senryu, Writing and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.

  1. lovely haiku!! i wish i knew how to write such a magnificent piece.. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    • This was, literally, inspired. The middle line leapt out at me from a post I was reading, crying out to become the core of a senryu. I counted … yes, seven syllables! Then the third line arose in my mind(accompanied by the music πŸ˜‰ )from that song by The 5th Fifth Dimension,

      I counted … five syllables! Absolute magic! Then the first line emerged in my consciousness from I know not where. In fact, it was only the title I had to do any work on at all. πŸ˜›


  2. Wonderful, Ben! πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: