Elegance

May 27

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ELEGANCE

The elegance in the room
That no one notices normally
And is rarely spoken of
Remains when everyone departs

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feeling.

Posted on May 27, 2012, in Poetry, Writing and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 18 Comments.

  1. skyraftwanderer | May 27, 2012 at 10:46 pm

    Reminds me of God in Futurama “When you do things right, people won’t be sure you’ve done anything at all.”

    Wonderful work with this. Love the sentiment expressed, and the simplicity with which you have done it.

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  2. lesleehare | May 27, 2012 at 11:08 pm

    Hmmm, I think I know a nice place for this one… 😉
    It’s lovely.

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  3. Betty Hayes Albright | May 28, 2012 at 5:11 am

    Beautiful, Ben… it’s the Essence of the ineffable which leaves me almost (but not completely) speechless.

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  4. Angela | May 28, 2012 at 8:39 am

    This is wonderful, Ben.

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  6. Archana | May 29, 2012 at 7:14 pm

    ..despite the shallowness of the ppl who were in the room earlier!
    🙂

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