The elegance in the room
That no one notices normally
And is rarely spoken of
Remains when everyone departs

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feeling.

Posted on May 27, 2012, in Poetry, Writing and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 18 Comments.

  1. Reminds me of God in Futurama “When you do things right, people won’t be sure you’ve done anything at all.”

    Wonderful work with this. Love the sentiment expressed, and the simplicity with which you have done it.

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  2. Hmmm, I think I know a nice place for this one… ๐Ÿ˜‰
    It’s lovely.

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  3. Beautiful, Ben… it’s the Essence of the ineffable which leaves me almost (but not completely) speechless.

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  4. This is wonderful, Ben.

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  5. ..despite the shallowness of the ppl who were in the room earlier!

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