Every Time You Succeed


Every time you succeed
In analysing the whole problem
To the point where you see exactly what’s wrong
And begin to investigate
Just what the answers are
You realise again
That it’s no use
To try and be clever …

About Ben Naga

The Spirit that graces me with its passing has no name and stems not from thoughts and words, though it gathers them up as it flows, but from feeling.

Posted on March 25, 2012, in Poetry, Writing and tagged , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.

  1. Very good, Ben. Made me smile ๐Ÿ™‚


  2. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words

    makes perfect sense!



  3. My vp has always been if you have to try to be clever, you aren’t. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    Or, to use another cliche, clever is as clever does.

    *rolls eyes* Ok, ok, that was ridiculous, I know. Blame it on the fever that’s currently trying to make me turn off the computer and curl back up in bed. But I’m too stubborn for it! I will prevail! *sneezes* Orrr, not.


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  5. So true! Nice work, Ben.


  6. I’m hlad you enjoyed it, Janice. ๐Ÿ™‚


  7. Ain’t it the truth?


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