Every Time You Succeed
EVERY TIME YOU SUCCEED
Every time you succeed
In analysing the whole problem
To the point where you see exactly what’s wrong
And begin to investigate
Just what the answers are
You realise again
That it’s no use
To try and be clever …
Posted on March 25, 2012, in Poetry, Writing and tagged Experts, Life, Limitations, Logic, Reflection, Truth. Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.
Ben Naga 
Very good, Ben. Made me smile 🙂
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Smiling is good. 🙂
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makes perfect sense!
)0(
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Solves very little however. 🙂
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My vp has always been if you have to try to be clever, you aren’t. 😉
Or, to use another cliche, clever is as clever does.
*rolls eyes* Ok, ok, that was ridiculous, I know. Blame it on the fever that’s currently trying to make me turn off the computer and curl back up in bed. But I’m too stubborn for it! I will prevail! *sneezes* Orrr, not.
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I hope your infection clears up soon. Now shut your your computer before you infect everyone else!
You may not know about this useful little page. 😎 http://en.support.wordpress.com/smilies/
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Yay, thank you! I tend to overuse a few little smilies, just because they’re all I can remember. This page will help enormously, and possibly keep my readers from strangling me until my “winking, blinking eye” falls out! 😛
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So true! Nice work, Ben.
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I’m hlad you enjoyed it, Janice. 🙂
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Ain’t it the truth?
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But again not a great poem qua poem; still – worth reiterating though, I believe.
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